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The Vixen

November 19, 2009

She is a young woman.

Why does everybody call her the vixen?

Maybe they wanted to refer to her beauty and call her ‘a fox’..  but no..  it is not what they mean..  she is the vixen. 

She is a very attractive female, with a shapely body. Not voluptuous but curvy enough. Sharp features and a great sense of dressing. It is the way she carries herself that attracts people towards her in the first place; but the second step is always backwards.. away from her.

What is it about her that everybody can sense since the first meeting? Why the steps that leap towards her are retracted ever so rapidly..?

Maybe it is the way she looks at you with those sharp piercing eyes that can make any giant uncomfortable; the way she honey-coats her words to suit you but the bitterness can still be felt, the way the questions start getting too personal since the word go.

All of it…. and it’s the sixth sense of humans I say, that warns the people to stay at a distance from her.

Afterall she is a young woman.

17 Comments leave one →
  1. November 19, 2009 6:42 am

    For a young woman these “qualities” are a necessitiy of the day!! More or less! Just enough to keep the vultures off but not too imbibed into her as to when someone SHE desires, too get repulsed!!

    Yes in this modern day.. women need to have some of these as a defence. but “too much of anything is bad..” and sometimes people can’t get comfortable in presence of such women.

    Did i get your post right or you wanted to say something else? 🙂

    this is exactly what i wanted to mean…. 🙂

    • November 19, 2009 7:14 am

      Ahh! Thatz brilliant! Well put in words Oorja 🙂 Nice one 🙂

      😀 thanks…

  2. Rashmi permalink
    November 19, 2009 6:51 am

    1st 🙂

    just missed.. ! 🙂

    • Rashmi permalink
      November 19, 2009 6:53 am

      Is it fiction….or you are trying to describe somebody near you..

      almost all my stories have a real life inspiration.. but with a touch of my imagination… 😀

      • November 19, 2009 7:14 am

        I hv this qs too 😐

        • November 19, 2009 7:15 am

          I mean did u get inspired by seeing someone and write it nw?

          yes added mirch masala to the character here… 😀

  3. November 19, 2009 8:30 am

    I guess there are certain people like that…

    That description kinda is something well I dont know if it makes sense.. like of a woman who can see through us…

    there are a few women like this… who just make u feel insecure… just by looking..

    Right..there are a few people (men & women) who just look so deep.. and not in a good way.. to understand… but to unnerve..

  4. November 19, 2009 9:01 am

    Interesting! Inspired by reality as you have already admitted.

    There is so much to get inspired all around us.. just need the eye and time to look……

  5. November 19, 2009 9:32 am

    interesting Oorja… very nice 🙂 🙂

    🙂 guess you haven’t met anyone like this ever..! that is why it is interesting..

  6. November 19, 2009 10:33 am

    Is she single ???? I really dont care if she stares ! 😀 😀 😀 😀

    some people never change… 😛
    unfortunately she’s a mother of a 6 year old… 😀 😀 😀 😀

  7. November 19, 2009 10:38 am

    I suppose it takes all kinds to make the world, eh? Nicely described!

    🙂 right… mixed nuts…

  8. November 19, 2009 3:02 pm

    🙂 Ah! Nicely worded & put!!! Sometimes just a stare is enough to freeze people 🙂

    yes… it makes one very concious…..

  9. November 21, 2009 4:56 am

    And what about men? What would you call a man like that? Is there a gender alternative to vixen?

    Yes men like those can be the ‘Vultures’ who have very sharp eyes…
    though i feel bad comparing them with beautiful wildlife.. 😉

  10. November 21, 2009 3:15 pm

    Wow, liked it!! Is this the first of a series, Oorja?

    hmm… a series…!!!! will have to think about it…

  11. November 22, 2009 9:32 am

    hey… continue the train of thought na…

    first u introduce the character… take it aage… 😀

    now will have to do something..
    you give me an idea… 😀

  12. November 22, 2009 1:23 pm

    she seems to have a tough outer shell and projects herself as a cold person to save herself.

    Maybe… or maybe she is cold….. (saying so considering her other behaviours and actions.. though not trying to judge..)

    just used the inspiration for my creativity…

  13. November 29, 2009 3:12 pm

    To a certain extant, all women are vixen and all men are vultures. With some people, you can sense it and in many, unfortunately, we can’t!!

    Destination Infinity

    to a certain extent you are correct.. 😀
    actually you are right.. we are like that to some point and i believe that is the part of us which protects us from other vixens and vultures… so it is a virtue (if in limit)..

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