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All she wants is..

October 11, 2009

He said he’d take her to the moon..

And saw two sweet questioning eyes.

He said ‘I love you’ every night..

Still felt something was not right..

What was it she was looking for..

Pleasing her, how could it be done?

 

And one night suddenly a thought came to him,

And when she least expected him..

He showed up at her door with a single rose..

And saw her face bloom like a garden..

He realized the truth that night..

That is all what a woman’s heart wants..

Small surprise tokens of the love.

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  1. October 11, 2009 10:09 am

    nice one Oorja :)

    Thankfully you have added ‘Small surprise’ else I would have thought ‘all a woman need is a single rose’ :lol:

    :-D Hehe… well sometimes she does… and sometimes she wants more……….

    who surprised you with single rose?? :)

    who else… my hubby dearest……!!! :-)
    this one now is fiction…
    but he actually did that when i arrived here.. when we were married i happened to join him after 2 long months of waiting… i landed here and i saw him standing.. waiting to recieve me with a single rose and chocolate…
    Hmmmmm…. it was one of my best days of life… :-)

  2. October 11, 2009 10:10 am

    FIRST!!!! :D

    yippieeee…! :-D

  3. October 11, 2009 12:21 pm

    just that little something extra, eh? :-)
    totally loved it!!! good one!

    The cherry on the top is more pleasurable than the whole cake.. ;-) :-)

  4. October 11, 2009 1:18 pm

    nicely expressed :)
    :-) :-)

  5. October 11, 2009 3:43 pm

    That is so true, Oorja!

    ‘That is all what a woman’s heart wants..

    Small surprise tokens of the love.’ – I am going to show this to my husband :)

    :-D :-D yes please make use of it….

    it has been written for all the husbands/boyfriends/lovers/friends… to better understand the women in their lives…

  6. October 11, 2009 6:12 pm

    Lovely!!!

    … just a small token of love is enough to delight a woman :)

    :-) if only the men knew….

  7. October 11, 2009 7:22 pm

    I think with men its slightly different… If someone chooses to give a gift or a surprise – we are always suspicious that he/she might have an insurance policy to sell immediately afterwards :P

    Destination Infinity

    LOL… :-)
    you skeptic guys don’t deserve to be surprised…

  8. October 12, 2009 5:31 am

    Thats all that she wants ??? Seriously??? Nahhh, he wouldve given his credit card along with the rose, Im damn sure !!! This is an edited version of the poetry to please women !!

    and this is the kind of thinking i want to change with this poem…………….. :P :P

    • October 13, 2009 5:51 am

      Nowadays women have their own cc to use! who wants to cajole it out of guys?

      • October 13, 2009 11:17 am

        women; when were they satisfied with thier own things ??? :D :D :D :D

  9. October 12, 2009 8:08 pm

    :D :D :D

    i agreeeeeeee

    all it takes is a rose! or a chocolate, in my case! :D

    lovely Oorja, and so delightfully written!!!!

    (((((((((hugs)))))))))

    ((((((((((((((((hugs))))))))))))))))))

    me not a chocolate person… :-)

    • October 12, 2009 8:09 pm

      u know…. sometimes its an unexpected hug even!!! forgot to add that! that is the single most delighful experience! a hug when in the middle of talking…when its least expected! :D :D

      *hugs oorja when she is still in middle of reading comment*
      :D :D :D

      yes… a hug is always welcome… especially the feeling the unexpected ones give is too good….. :-) :-)

      {{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}

  10. October 13, 2009 2:47 am

    I liked this… read it at 6 in the morning and it inspired me to write something too :) :)

    :-) coming right now to read…

  11. October 13, 2009 4:08 am

    Too good and so very true!! :) When will the guys learn ;) :roll:

    lets impart some wisdom now…. :-D :-D

  12. October 13, 2009 5:52 am

    Awesome!!! Came here thru hitchy :)

    thanks.. :-)

    welcome here..

  13. October 13, 2009 5:55 am

    so true oorja…it takes only lil to impress a women…if only men in their life can understand this…

    beautifully written !!!

    this is my attempt to convey that…. :-)

    there are a lot many men in our blogospehere… even if one of them gets the idea… and i think one did… ;-)

    i just felt like this… so i wrote it…. :-)

  14. October 13, 2009 10:39 am

    Lovely :) Beautifully expressed :)

    Dropped here from Hitchy’s.

    welcome here.. :) thanks…. :-)

  15. October 13, 2009 1:39 pm

    wow !! that’s so right !! that’s exactly what a woman wants !!
    If only men could understand that (at least my hubby :-))

    right… show him the post… ;-)

    welcome here… :-)

  16. October 13, 2009 4:42 pm

    Beautiful lines, Oorja!

    “Small surprise tokens of the love.”

    just wrote my heart out… :-)

  17. October 13, 2009 6:08 pm

    came from hiotwriter blog..First time here :)

    My husband definitely needs to see this.

    Hehe…. always welcome… :-)

  18. October 15, 2009 2:21 am

    Lovely!! And true, this is all women want :)

    :-) Hmmmmmmmmm….

  19. October 15, 2009 4:04 am

    Oh dear I totally agree!!!

    All I need is a simple rose at the end of day !!! I mean after those lovely bags & clothes ;-)

    LOL…. :-D

    Just kidding!!! I loved the simplicity of the words & the essence. Men wanna bring big things but they forget that it is the simpler things in life which make a difference :)

    Exactly.. they go for the big stuff and think that’ll make us happy.. it will.. but they should understand the place of the smaller items that can be more valueable in conveying love…

  20. October 15, 2009 9:41 am

    true!!

  21. October 19, 2009 8:34 pm

    The world would have been a real heaven if only thing that women wanted was ‘just a rose’.
    Would have made it all so easy ;-)

    ya ya…. why not….. :-P

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